Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hiện chưa truyền đạt được ý vì có vẻ bạn nhầm hoặc phát âm chưa rõ các từ “bike” và “childhood”; ngoài ra, câu hỏi ở quá khứ nên cần dùng “did” hoặc “had”, không dùng “have”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu, rồi thêm một chi tiết cụ thể như thời điểm bạn có xe hoặc nơi bạn thường đạp.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã nêu được ý rằng xe đạp phổ biến, đặc biệt với học sinh, nhưng nhiều cụm từ chưa rõ nghĩa và ngữ pháp khiến câu trả lời khó hiểu. Hãy dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, chẳng hạn “Bikes are quite popular, especially among students”, sau đó giải thích một lý do cụ thể. Dùng từ nối như “because” và diễn đạt tự nhiên rằng xe đạp thuận tiện cho những quãng đường ngắn.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They’re an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, such as going to school.

× Yes, I have a pie when I try.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of have and was instead of try. Bike is also the contextually appropriate word for answering the question.

× Well, it is by a still various popular in my country.

✓ Well, it is still very popular in my country.

Use the adverb very to modify the adjective popular. Still is correctly placed before very popular. The other words in the original phrase do not fit grammatically in this sentence.

× Especially sequelists are as known students, and people who are near schools, because they are just as easy for strong traveling.

✓ Cyclists are especially well known among students and people who live near schools because bikes are easy to travel on.

Use among when describing recognition within a group, and use the phrasal structure travel on a bike. The original phrases as known and easy for strong traveling do not use grammatical prepositions or constructions. The correction also makes the likely intended meaning clearer.