Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I didn't. I had no bikes when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because mmm it is just a transport tool for us to go anywhere. So no.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,但两句话表达了同一意思,显得重复。可以补充一个具体细节,例如家人为什么没有给你买自行车,或者你小时候通常怎样出行,让回答更自然、更完整。
Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived close to school, so I usually walked there with my parents.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点和理由,但“mmm”和“So no”会影响流畅度,而且“a transport tool for us to go anywhere”不够自然,也没有清楚说明为什么自行车不受欢迎。建议先直接回答,再具体解释人们更常选择的交通方式或原因,并使用“because”或“for example”等连接表达。
Ejemplo: I wouldn't say bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or public transport, especially when they have to travel long distances or commute in bad weather.
× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because mmm it is just a transport tool for us to go anywhere.
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because they are just a means of transportation for us to get around.
前面提到的主语是复数“bikes”,后面用单数代词“it”指代,代词与所指对象不一致。应使用复数代词“they”。此外,“a means of transportation”是表达“交通工具/交通方式”更自然的说法。