Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-25 17:54:57

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Did you have a body when you were a child?

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, I do. Because I uh live in in the countryside, uh, so the bice uh the biceps are very popular in in my country because it is it uh it's cheap and convenient. And uh in my village uh

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Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 5.0

Sugerencia: Bạn chưa trả lời câu hỏi mà lặp lại câu hỏi, đồng thời nghe nhầm “bike” thành “body”. Hãy chú ý từ khóa và trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes” hoặc “No”, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc trải nghiệm đạp xe thời thơ ấu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 38.0

Sugerencia: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm và lý do phù hợp, nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều từ ngập ngừng, lặp từ và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Dùng “bikes” thay vì “biceps”, tránh mở đầu bằng “Because” sau khi đã nói “Yes, I do”, và kết thúc câu trả lời bằng một ví dụ cụ thể từ làng của bạn. Nên nói khoảng 2–3 câu mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in the countryside. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips, so many people in my village use them to get to the shops or visit their neighbors.

Gramática

16: Incorrect conjunction use

× Yes, I do. Because I uh live in in the countryside, uh, so the bice uh the biceps are very popular in in my country because it is it uh it's cheap and convenient.

✓ Yes, I do. I live in the countryside, so bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient.

Using because and so together to connect the same cause and result is redundant. Use because without so, or use so without because. The repeated words and fillers can also be omitted for a clearer answer.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× The bice uh the biceps are very popular in in my country because it is it uh it's cheap and convenient.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are.

Vocabulario

Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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