Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yeah, when I was five years old, my dad gave me a bike and teach me how to ride it, and now it's let me.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yeah, when I walk on the street, I saw many pedestrians drive by to go to their company or school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 你直接回答了问题,也提到了父亲送你自行车的具体经历,这是不错的细节。不过要注意时态一致:过去发生的事情应使用“taught”,而不是“teach”。最后的“now it's let me”意思不清楚,可以补充这辆车后来是否让你更独立,或说明你现在是否还骑车。建议把回答控制在两三句,并用“because”或“so”连接补充内容。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was five, my dad gave me a bike and taught me how to ride it. I was a little nervous at first, but I soon learned to ride on my own.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 43.0Sugerencia: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎的观点,并尝试用街上的观察来支持回答,但例子中的词语搭配不准确:“pedestrians”指行人,不是骑车的人;“drive by”通常指开车经过。可以说“people ride bikes”或“commute by bike”。此外,描述平时的观察应使用一般现在时,例如“I see”,并补充一个具体原因或场景。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling to work or school, especially during rush hour. They’re convenient and help people avoid traffic.
× Yeah, when I was five years old, my dad gave me a bike and teach me how to ride it, and now it's let me.
✓ Yeah, when I was five years old, my dad gave me a bike and taught me how to ride it, and now it lets me ride it.
“gave”表示过去发生的事情,因此并列的动词“teach”也要用过去式“taught”。描述五岁时发生的事时,要保持过去时态一致。
× Yeah, when I was five years old, my dad gave me a bike and teach me how to ride it, and now it's let me.
✓ Yeah, when I was five years old, my dad gave me a bike and taught me how to ride it, and now it lets me ride it.
“it”是第三人称单数,表达现在的情况时,动词“let”应加-s,写作“lets”。另外,“it’s”是“it is”的缩写,不能直接接在这里的“let”前。
× Yeah, when I walk on the street, I saw many pedestrians drive by to go to their company or school.
✓ Yeah, when I walk on the street, I see many pedestrians drive by to go to their company or school.
“when I walk”描述经常发生的情况,主句也应使用一般现在时,因此把过去式“saw”改为“see”。谈论习惯或普遍情况时,应保持时态一致。