Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve “I had a bike” ifadesini kullanın; “one a bike” gereksiz tekrardır. Bisiklet kullanmayı bilmediğinizi anlatmak için “I didn’t know how to ride it” deyin; “use a driver bike” doğal bir ifade değildir. Geçmişteki durumu anlatırken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın. Yanıtı kısa tutup tek bir açıklayıcı ayrıntıyla tamamlayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. I mostly used it to play with my friends in the yard.

Sugerencia: Görüşünüz anlaşılır; ancak “in our country” ve “popular” ifadelerini tekrarlamayın. Önce net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bisiklet kullanımının neden az olduğunu açıklayın. “People don’t ride bikes generally” yerine “people generally don’t ride bikes” veya “few people cycle” kullanın. “I can see the abroad” doğal değildir; “when I travel abroad” ya da “in some other countries” diyebilirsiniz. Bir bağlaçla fikrinizi toparlayın ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın.

Ejemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer driving cars. As a result, cycling isn’t a common way to get around. In some other countries, though, more people use bikes for their daily commute.

× I actually had one a bike.

✓ I actually had a bike.

The words one and a are both determiners and should not be used together before the same noun. Use a bike, or say I had one if the noun is already clear from context.

× I don't I didn't know how can uh use a driver bike.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike.

After know how, use an infinitive with to, or form an indirect question with statement word order. Do not use the direct-question order how can I. The phrase ride a bike is also the natural way to describe using a bike.

× Because in our country, uh, the cars are really so popular.

✓ Because in our country, cars are really popular.

When speaking generally about cars, do not use the definite article the. The also is not needed here because it does not refer to a specific group of cars.

× People uh, don't use generally bikes don't ride bikes.

✓ People generally don't ride bikes.

The adverb generally normally goes before the main verb phrase in this sentence. Place it before don't ride, and remove the repeated, unfinished phrase.

× I can see the abroad they use, they ride bikes.

✓ I can see that people abroad ride bikes.

Abroad is an adverb and is not preceded by the. Use that to introduce the clause, and include people as the subject of ride.