Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, when I was a child, my mother gave a bike in my birthday, so I was excited.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because bike is a cheap and healthy way to get around. For example, many people ride to work or school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,但“gave a bike in my birthday”搭配错误,应说“gave me a bike for my birthday”。还可以补充一个具体细节,例如你骑车的地点或感受,让回答更自然、完整。
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday, and I was thrilled. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 82.0Sugerencia: 回答切题,并用原因和例子进行了补充。注意泛指自行车时应使用复数“bikes”或“cycling”,而不是单数“bike”;也可以加入一个更具体的出行场景,让内容更生动。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and healthy way to get around. For instance, many students cycle to school, and some office workers ride to work to avoid traffic.
× Yes, when I was a child, my mother gave a bike in my birthday, so I was excited.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, my mother gave me a bike for my birthday, so I was excited.
表示“作为生日礼物”时,应该用“for my birthday”,不能用“in my birthday”。此外,“give”后可以加上表示接受者的“me”,使表达更清楚。
× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because bike is a cheap and healthy way to get around.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because a bike is a cheap and healthy way to get around.
“bike”是可数名词单数,单独作主语时前面需要加冠词。这里可以说“a bike”,表示“一辆自行车”或泛指自行车这种出行方式。