Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn có trả lời trực tiếp là có, nhưng phần sau có nhiều lần lặp và ngập ngừng khiến ý về chiếc xe đạp thứ hai và chiếc cuối cùng khó hiểu. Hãy sắp xếp thông tin theo trình tự thời gian, dùng cấu trúc quá khứ chính xác như “I got my first bike when I was in Grade 1” và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể nếu cần.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was in Grade 1, and I had a second one as I grew older. That was the last bike I owned as a child.

Sugerencia: Bạn nêu được quan điểm “không”, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt giữa chừng và ý về người lớn chưa rõ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích nhóm nào thường đi xe đạp, rồi đối chiếu với phương tiện người lớn dùng để đi làm. Dùng cụm tự nhiên như “commute to work” thay cho “transport their work”.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. They are mostly used by students, while many adults prefer motorbikes or cars to commute to work. So, you don't see many adults cycling in their daily lives.

× ...and that the last one I have.

✓ ...and that was the last one I had.

The answer refers to bikes the student had in childhood, so use the past-tense forms was and had rather than the present-tense have.

× ...I was at grade one...

✓ ...I was in first grade...

Use in when referring to the grade a student is attending. In this context, first grade is also the more natural expression.

× ...and that the last one I have.

✓ ...and that was the last one I had.

The original clause is missing a finite verb after that. Add was to form a complete clause; had also keeps the sentence in the past.

× ...due to my observation about my country...

✓ ...based on my observations of my country...

Based on is a natural expression for introducing the evidence behind an opinion. The usual preposition with observations in this context is of, not about.

× ...the adults who usually who are in need to transport their work they evaluate

✓ ...adults who need to travel to work usually...

The original has repeated and interrupted clauses, and the phrase are in need to does not form a grammatical construction. Use need to + verb, as in need to travel. The answer also stops before completing its final thought, so add a complete ending when continuing it.