Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句解释停止骑车的原因。注意冠词和表达：应说“had a bike”；“the back was too small”不够自然，可以说“it had become too small for me”；“use in the public transport”应改为“take public transport”。避免把多个想法都堆在一个长句里，可用“because”和“after that”连接。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I stopped riding it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it, so it became too small and uncomfortable. After that, I usually took public transport.

Sugerencia: 开头应直接回答，并注意“bikes”而不是“birds”，“shared bikes”而不是“shark bike”。主谓一致方面应说“bikes are”；“short trip”应使用复数“short trips”。表达共享单车时，可以说街上有很多共享单车，人们可以通过手机应用租用。用一到两个具体细节说明它们为什么受欢迎，并避免重复表达“短途出行”。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, you can see shared bikes all over the streets, and people can rent them through a mobile app. They’re especially useful for getting around busy areas.

× Yes, I had bike when I was a child but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me and later I usually use in the public transport.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me. Later, I usually used public transport.

“Bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词“a”，所以应说“had a bike”。

× Yes, I had bike when I was a child but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me and later I usually use in the public transport.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me. Later, I usually used public transport.

这段话描述的是童年以及大约16岁时发生的事情，语境是过去时，因此“use”应改为过去式“used”。

× Yes, I had bike when I was a child but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me and later I usually use in the public transport.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I stopped using it when I was about 16 because I had outgrown it and the back was too small and uncomfortable for me. Later, I usually used public transport.

表示乘坐公共交通时，通常直接说“use public transport”，不需要在“use”后加“in”，也不需要在“public transport”前加“the”。

× Yes, I think birds are quite popular in my country because the bike are cheap and convenient for short trip.

✓ Yes, I think birds are quite popular in my country because bikes are cheap and convenient for short trips.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，与“are”搭配；泛指短途出行时，“trip”也应使用复数“trips”。

× For example, there are many shark bike in on the street and people can use it by the application and rent them to get a short trip.

✓ For example, there are many shark bikes on the street, and people can use them through an application and rent them for short trips.

“Many”后面需要接可数名词复数，因此“bike”应改为“bikes”。

× For example, there are many shark bike in on the street and people can use it by the application and rent them to get a short trip.

✓ For example, there are many shark bikes on the street, and people can use them through an application and rent them for short trips.

“On the street”表示“在街上”，不能同时使用“in”和“on”。表示通过应用程序使用服务时，可用“through an application”。

× For example, there are many shark bike in on the street and people can use it by the application and rent them to get a short trip.

✓ For example, there are many shark bikes on the street, and people can use them through an application and rent them for short trips.

前面说的是复数“bikes”，后面指代这些自行车时应使用复数代词“them”，不能先用单数“it”再用“them”。