Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, of course, when I wish to try, I had own bike with the pink bicycle and I remembered that time I used. I usually rike a bike with my neighbor and it can it can be a good memory that I can remember to right now.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
No, I think bicycle are not popular in my country because people usually use motorbike or their own car to travel in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently when describing childhood. Say “I had my own bike” rather than “I had own bike,” and avoid repeating “remember.” Add one clear, specific detail, such as the bike’s color or where you rode it. Check pronunciation and spelling of “rode” rather than “rike.”
Ejemplo: Yes, I had my own pink bike when I was a child. I often rode it around the neighborhood with my neighbor. Those rides are still a happy memory for me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Your opinion and reason are clear, but use the plural “bicycles” and “motorbikes.” Avoid repeating “in my country”; you can replace the second instance with a more specific detail or simply remove it. Consider adding a contrast, such as whether bikes are used for exercise or short trips.
Ejemplo: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are more convenient for commuting. However, some people still ride bikes for exercise or short trips.
× Yes, of course, when I wish to try, I had own bike with the pink bicycle and I remembered that time I used.
✓ Yes, of course. When I wanted to try cycling, I had my own bike, a pink bicycle, and I remember using it then.
The answer describes a childhood experience, so use the past tense wanted rather than the present tense wish. Use remember for a memory you have now. Keep the verbs in a consistent tense when describing the past.
× Yes, of course, when I wish to try, I had own bike with the pink bicycle and I remembered that time I used.
✓ Yes, of course. When I wanted to try cycling, I had my own bike, a pink bicycle, and I remember using it then.
Own needs a possessive determiner before it. My own bike correctly shows that the bike belonged to the speaker. The verb used also needs an object here, so using it makes the meaning complete.
× I usually rike a bike with my neighbor and it can it can be a good memory that I can remember to right now.
✓ I usually rike a bike with my neighbor, and it is a good memory that I can still remember right now.
The phrase it can be does not fit the intended meaning of describing a memory the speaker has now. Use it is to describe the memory in the present. In past-tense storytelling, use a past-tense verb for the childhood activity.
× I usually rike a bike with my neighbor and it can it can be a good memory that I can remember to right now.
✓ I usually rike a bike with my neighbor, and it is a good memory that I can still remember right now.
Do not use to before right now in this sentence. Say remember right now or, more naturally, still remember now.
× No, I think bicycle are not popular in my country because people usually use motorbike or their own car to travel in my country.
✓ No, I think bicycles are not popular in my country because people usually use a motorbike or their own car to travel there.
Bicycle is a countable noun, and the sentence refers to bicycles in general, so use the plural form bicycles. Check that the noun form matches the intended meaning when speaking generally.
× No, I think bicycle are not popular in my country because people usually use motorbike or their own car to travel in my country.
✓ No, I think bicycles are not popular in my country because people usually use a motorbike or their own car to travel there.
Motorbike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a motorbike when referring to one motorbike in a general example.