Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did. When I was around 7 years old, my parents bought a small bicycle suitable for.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Sure, bikes, especially the shared bikes, are almost everywhere in my country. It's really convenience to ride.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,但最后的“suitable for”后面缺少宾语,句子没有说完。请补充自行车适合谁或适合做什么,并可加一个具体细节,例如你在哪里骑车。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was around seven, my parents bought me a small bike that was just the right size for me. I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答切题,也用“especially”补充了具体类型。不过,“convenience”是名词,这里应使用形容词“convenient”;另外,可以说明共享单车为什么受欢迎,让回答更具体。
Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Bikes, especially shared bikes, are very popular in my country. They’re convenient for short trips, and you can usually find one near a bus or subway station.
× When I was around 7 years old, my parents bought a small bicycle suitable for.
✓ When I was around 7 years old, my parents bought me a small bicycle that was suitable for me.
“Suitable for”后面需要接宾语;原句在介词“for”后没有宾语,因此句子意思不完整。可以补上“me”,表示自行车适合学生本人。
× It's really convenience to ride.
✓ It's really convenient to ride.
这里需要用形容词“convenient”描述骑车这件事是否方便。“Convenience”是名词,不能放在“really”后作表语。