Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain your father's reason and when you eventually got a bike. Use the past tense consistently: say “I didn’t have” rather than “I was not have,” and “when I was a child” rather than “when I was child.” Avoid repeating or restarting phrases, and use natural expressions such as “ride safely” instead of “ride accurately.”

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my father thought it would be dangerous. He bought me one when I was older and could ride safely.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer and support it with one specific observation or reason. Avoid repeating “every small boy” and “many of the boys,” and make subjects and verbs agree: for example, “boys want” rather than “boys wants.” Use “bicycles” if you mean ordinary bikes, and explain the idea of showing maturity in a more natural way.

Ejemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many boys enjoy riding them with their friends, and having a bike can make them feel more independent.

× No, I was not have a bike when I was child because my father thought that he is that it is dangerous for me and he told me that when he got when I got adult and able to and able to ride bike accurately then he gave me bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my father thought it was dangerous for me. He told me he would give me a bike when I became an adult and was able to ride one safely.

Use did not have, not was not have, to form the negative in the simple past. Since the father thought this in the past, use was dangerous rather than is dangerous. In reported speech, would give is appropriate for an action that was in the future from the past point of view.

× No, I was not have a bike when I was child because my father thought that he is that it is dangerous for me and he told me that when he got when I got adult and able to and able to ride bike accurately then he gave me bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my father thought it was dangerous for me. He told me he would give me a bike when I became an adult and was able to ride one safely.

Use a before singular countable nouns in these phrases: a child, an adult, and a bike. Singular countable nouns generally need an article or another determiner.

× No, I was not have a bike when I was child because my father thought that he is that it is dangerous for me and he told me that when he got when I got adult and able to and able to ride bike accurately then he gave me bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my father thought it was dangerous for me. He told me he would give me a bike when I became an adult and was able to ride one safely.

Accurately usually means doing something without mistakes or errors. Safely is the suitable word here because the intended meaning is riding without danger.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country and nowadays every small boy, every small boy also want to ride bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, and nowadays every young boy also wants to ride a bike.

Every boy is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular form wants. Use a bike because bike is a singular countable noun.

× He only many of the boys was on.

✓ Many of the boys only want to ride bikes.

The original phrase does not form a clear, complete sentence: its word order is confusing, and was on has no clear meaning in this context. If you meant that many boys want to ride bikes, use the corrected sentence. Avoid restarting the sentence mid-thought.

× Many of the boys only want to ride bike because he want to show his friends and also to show his maturity.

✓ Many of the boys only want to ride bikes because they want to show their friends and demonstrate their maturity.

The subject many of the boys is plural, so use the plural pronouns they and their rather than he and his. Use bikes in this general statement to refer to bikes as a category.