Bike— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Frankly speaking, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to ride it, but now I I kind of forgot how to ride a bike because I had a psychological trauma. Once I fell over in my bike and after that I have never ridden it again. It was very beautiful actually. It was pink with sunflowers and my dad taught me how to.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I would say that bikes are extremely popular in my country. There are a lot of good facilities for bike riders, a lot of payments for bike riders and so on and my country is very large and it takes you a lot of time to get from point eight to
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Ответ в целом раскрывает тему и содержит конкретные детали: вы упомянули падение, внешний вид велосипеда и помощь отца. Однако есть самоповтор («I I»), неестественное выражение «fell over in my bike» и слишком сильное «psychological trauma» для описания обычного падения. Используйте «fell off my bike» и объясните последствие проще. Также объедините короткие предложения и следите за согласованием времён: здесь естественнее сказать «I haven’t ridden one since».
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and my dad taught me how to ride it. It was pink and decorated with sunflowers. However, I fell off it once and became afraid of riding, so I haven’t ridden a bike since.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Начало ответа прямое, но он обрывается на «from point eight to», поэтому мысль не завершена. Выражение «payments for bike riders» неясно: вероятно, вы имеете в виду велодорожки, парковки или пункты проката. Уточните, какие именно условия делают велосипеды популярными, и логично завершите мысль о больших расстояниях в стране. Используйте связки, например «because» и «for example».
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with good cycling infrastructure. There are plenty of bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes, which make cycling convenient and affordable. However, because the country is so large, people often use bikes for shorter trips rather than travelling between cities.
Gramática
× Frankly speaking, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to ride it, but now I I kind of forgot how to ride a bike because I had a psychological trauma.
✓ Frankly speaking, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to ride it, but now I kind of forgot how to ride a bike because I had a psychological trauma.
The pronoun I is repeated accidentally. Use it only once to avoid a disrupted sentence structure.
× Once I fell over in my bike and after that I have never ridden it again.
✓ Once I fell off my bike, and after that I have never ridden it again.
Use off, not in, to describe falling from a bike. The usual expression is fall off a bike.
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