Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答有直接回应问题，但时态和句子结构问题较多，导致后半部分意思不清楚。谈过去的经历时要用过去时，例如用“had”代替“have”，并用“when I was twelve”交代时间。你提到父母很忙，但“they don't have money taking home, taking my home”无法表达清楚；建议说明父母工作忙，所以给你买自行车或接送你不方便。控制在两三句内即可。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about twelve and in middle school. My parents were busy with work, so having a bike made it easier for me to get around.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，也给出了原因和补充信息。注意“more inconvenient”与前面的意思不一致；如果想表达电动车的优点，应说“more convenient”。“hierals”拼写或用词不清楚，可以改成“hills”或删去。另可使用更自然的“electric bikes”和“long-distance journeys”，并将结尾改成更顺畅的并列表达。

Ejemplo: I don’t think traditional bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer electric bikes for daily travel. They are faster and more convenient, especially for longer journeys or hilly areas. Also, many cities have few protected bike lanes, so people may not feel safe cycling.

× Yes, I have a bike in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.

“In my childhood”表示过去的时间，因此应使用一般过去时“had”，而不是现在时“have”。描述童年经历时，动词通常要与过去时间保持一致。

× I was twelve years old in the middle school I have a bike because my parents were busy with their workers so they don't have money taking home, taking my home.

✓ When I was twelve and in middle school, I had a bike. My parents were busy with work, so they didn't have the money to take me home.

原句把多个意思直接连在一起，缺少恰当的连接和标点，句子结构不清楚。可以将内容拆成两个句子，并用“When I was...”引出时间背景。表达“有钱做某事”时，用“have the money to do something”，所以应说“the money to take me home”。

× I was twelve years old in the middle school I have a bike because my parents were busy with their workers so they don't have money taking home, taking my home.

✓ When I was twelve and in middle school, I had a bike. My parents were busy with work, so they didn't have the money to take me home.

“Workers”指“工人”，但这里想表达父母忙于“工作”，应使用不可数名词“work”，而不是复数名词“workers”。可以记住固定表达“be busy with work”。

× I was twelve years old in the middle school I have a bike because my parents were busy with their workers so they don't have money taking home, taking my home.

✓ When I was twelve and in middle school, I had a bike. My parents were busy with work, so they didn't have the money to take me home.

这句话讲的是童年时期发生的事情，前面的“was”和“were”已经表明时间在过去，因此“don't”也应改为过去式“didn't”。讲述过去经历时，要保持时态一致。

× For example, electronic bikes are faster and more inconvenient for long distance and hierals and there is little cycling culture or safe bike lanes in many cities.

✓ For example, electronic bikes are faster and more inconvenient for long-distance travel and hills, and there is little cycling culture and there are few safe bike lanes in many cities.

“There is”后面适合接单数名词或不可数名词，如“little cycling culture”；“safe bike lanes”是复数，因此应搭配“There are”。把两部分分别写成“There is little cycling culture”和“There are few safe bike lanes”，主谓关系会更清楚。