Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了妈妈教你骑车，但回答没有完整结束，且“when I were”应改为“when I was”。建议补充一个具体细节，例如你几岁学会骑车、在哪里练习，或骑车给你留下了什么印象。注意使用完整句子，并用连接词自然衔接细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and my mum taught me how to ride it. I practised in the park near our home, and I was really proud when I could ride without help.

Sugerencia: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎”的观点，也尝试说明原因，但“so nanning bikes”含义不清，“ride a bike to anywhere”不自然，而且最后一句没有说完。建议用清楚的数量或场景描述街上的自行车，并说明骑车的实际好处；可以说“a convenient and environmentally friendly way to get around”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people cycling on the streets, especially in busy city centres. They are convenient for short journeys, and they are also an environmentally friendly way to get around.

× I did have a bike when I were a child.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child.

主语是“I”，一般过去时应使用“was”，不能使用“were”。可以记住：I/he/she/it 对应 was；you/we/they 对应 were。

× At that time, my mom always taught me how to ride the bike and when I was a pupil

✓ At that time, when I was a pupil, my mom always taught me how to ride a bike.

原句用“and when”连接后，后半部分只有时间从句，没有完整的主句，导致句子结构不完整。可以把“When I was a pupil”移到主句前作时间状语，让句子结构完整。

× People can ride a bike to anywhere they want to.

✓ People can ride a bike anywhere they want to.

表示“在任何想去的地方骑车”时，anywhere 本身已表示地点，不需要在前面加介词“to”。可以说“go to a place”，但通常说“go anywhere”或“ride anywhere”。

× It's really a good transportation for protecting the...

✓ It's really good transportation.

“Transportation”通常是不可数名词，表示“交通方式／交通运输”时前面不加不定冠词“a”。原句末尾的“for protecting the...”没有说完；需要补全后面的内容，或删去未完成的部分。