Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”，并注意谈论童年经历时使用一般过去时，例如用“did”或“had”，不要用“do have”。“back”应为“bike”；表达骑车上学可说“ride my bike to school”。可补充一个具体细节，例如上学路程或骑车的感受。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school because it was a convenient way to get there. It also gave me a bit more independence.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“A hundred percent”在这里不够自然；可改为“Definitely”或“Yes, I think so”。注意“in recent years”通常不加“the”，并将“use it really convenient”改为“they are very convenient to use”。避免重复使用“And also”，用“because”“for example”等连接词组织理由；还可以具体说明共享单车方便、便宜在哪里。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Shared bikes have become very popular in my country in recent years. They’re convenient for short trips, such as getting from a nearby suburb to the city centre, and they’re usually cheaper than taking a taxi.

× When I was a child, I do have a back 'cause I really need a back to commute from home to school.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike because I really needed a bike to commute from home to school.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，应用一般过去时，因此 do have 和 need 应分别改为 had 和 needed。根据题目语境，back 应为 bike；这属于词汇识别问题，不属于所列语法类型。

× A hundred percent in the recent years there are many shared bicycles around the city, everywhere almost.

✓ A hundred percent. In recent years, there are many shared bicycles around the city, almost everywhere.

固定表达是 in recent years，中间不加定冠词 the。修改后也用句号将肯定回答与后面的完整句子分开。

× A hundred percent in the recent years there are many shared bicycles around the city, everywhere almost.

✓ A hundred percent. In recent years, there are many shared bicycles around the city, almost everywhere.

almost 应放在它修饰的 everywhere 前面，因此应说 almost everywhere，而不是 everywhere almost。

× And also we can use it really convenient from A to B or from suburb to the city center.

✓ Also, we can use them very conveniently to travel from A to B or from a suburb to the city center.

it 是单数代词，但前文的共享自行车是复数，因此应使用 them。提到复数名词时，代词也要与其保持一致。

× And also we can use it really convenient from A to B or from suburb to the city center.

✓ Also, we can use them very conveniently to travel from A to B or from a suburb to the city center.

convenient 是形容词，不能直接修饰 use 这个动作。这里需要副词 conveniently 来说明使用自行车的方式。

× And also we can use it really convenient from A to B or from suburb to the city center.

✓ Also, we can use them very conveniently to travel from A to B or from a suburb to the city center.

suburb 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里可以说 a suburb，表示某个郊区。