Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Use past tense consistently: say “it had” rather than “it has,” and “the color of my bike was blue” rather than “my bike color was blue.” The final sentence is difficult to follow, so explain simply why receiving the bike made you happy. Avoid the vague closing phrase “Yeah, just like that.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a blue bike with training wheels when I was a child. It also had a penguin sticker on it, which made it feel special. My dad gave it to me after I had asked for one for a long time, so I was really excited.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and make the contrast clearer: bikes may not be common for commuting, but people still use them for exercise or leisure. Use more natural phrases such as “bicycles aren’t very popular for daily transport,” “cycling for sport,” and “dedicated bike lanes.” Replace “'cause” with “because” for a more polished response, and add a specific supporting detail if possible.

Ejemplo: Bikes aren’t very popular for daily transport in my country because most people use motorcycles or cars. However, some people ride them for exercise or fun, especially in parks. There aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, so cycling on busy roads can be inconvenient.

× When I was a child, I used to have a bike and it has a training wheels on it.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike, and it had training wheels on it.

Training wheels is plural, so it cannot be preceded by the singular article a. Use training wheels without an article, or say a set of training wheels.

× When I was a child, I used to have a bike and it has a training wheels on it.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bike, and it had training wheels on it.

The sentence describes a bike from your childhood, so the past-tense verb had is needed instead of has.

× I remember my bike color was blue and it has a Penguin sticker on it.

✓ I remember my bike color was blue, and it had a Penguin sticker on it.

The bike and its sticker are being described in the past, so use had rather than has.

× Then what I like the most about my bike was I got it from my dad and I finally have a bike after I pick and I was crying.

✓ What I liked most about my bike was that I got it from my dad. I finally had a bike after I had asked for one and cried.

The story is about childhood, so use past-tense forms such as liked and had. Pick should also be changed to a past-tense form, but the likely intended meaning is asking for a bike; had asked expresses that request before receiving it.

× Then what I like the most about my bike was I got it from my dad and I finally have a bike after I pick and I was crying.

✓ What I liked most about my bike was that I got it from my dad. I finally had a bike after I had asked for one and cried.

The clause after was needs to be introduced with that: what I liked most was that I got it. The original also joins several ideas in a confusing way. Separate the ideas into clear sentences and use parallel verb forms in asked for one and cried.

× It's not so popular for daily transportation 'cause we usually just use motorcycles or maybe cars, but when we do use a bike it's just for fun or maybe doing cycling for sport 'cause we don't actually have a special land for biker.

✓ Bikes are not very popular for daily transportation because we usually use motorcycles or cars. When we do use bikes, it is just for fun or perhaps for sport, because we do not actually have special bike lanes for bikers.

The original sentence is difficult to follow because it combines several ideas and uses mismatched structures: for fun is not parallel with doing cycling for sport. Use parallel forms, such as for fun or for sport, and divide the long sentence into clearer parts.

× It's not so popular for daily transportation 'cause we usually just use motorcycles or maybe cars, but when we do use a bike it's just for fun or maybe doing cycling for sport 'cause we don't actually have a special land for biker.

✓ Bikes are not very popular for daily transportation because we usually use motorcycles or cars. When we do use bikes, it is just for fun or perhaps for sport, because we do not actually have special bike lanes for bikers.

The statement refers to bikers in general, so the plural bikers is more appropriate than the singular biker. Bikes is also the natural plural form when speaking generally about bicycles.