Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. My parents buy a bag for me when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. Umm, some shared bags, uh, are placed everywhere. In my country people can rent a bag for a meal for a final meal.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: 回答开头直接,但后半句有明显的时态错误:“when I was a child”描述过去,应使用“bought”而不是“buy”。另外,题目问的是自行车,回答中的“bag”会让意思变成“包”;请确认并清楚说出“bike”。可以补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色或你骑车的地点。
Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. My parents bought me a bike when I was about eight. It was bright red, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 22.0Sugerencia: 回答有明确表态,但后续内容因多次使用“bag”而偏离题意;如果你想表达“共享单车”,应说“shared bikes”或“bikes available for rent”。“for a meal for a final meal”表达不清,也没有具体说明自行车为什么受欢迎。建议先直接回答,再用一个具体原因或使用场景支持观点,并减少“umm”和“uh”等停顿词。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. There are shared bikes all over the place, so people can rent one for a short trip. They’re convenient and often cheaper than taking a taxi.
× My parents buy a bag for me when I was a child.
✓ My parents bought a bag for me when I was a child.
句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此主句中的动词也应使用一般过去时。“buy”的过去式是“bought”。