Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-21 21:48:54

Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid. It was bought by my father, and he taught me how to ride a bike, and it is very useful.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People usually ride a bag bike to their workplace or to other places and it is very convenient and fun.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 回答切题,也提到了父亲买车并教你骑车,但需要注意时态一致:谈童年经历时用过去时,例如将“have”改为“had”,并把“is”改为“was”。“bike”重复较多,可以用“it”代替;另外,说明它当时如何有用,并用连接词自然补充细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me and taught me how to ride it. I used it to get around the neighborhood, which was both convenient and fun.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 开头直接回答了问题,但“a bag bike”表达不清楚,可能是想说“a bike”;谈人们普遍骑车时应使用复数“bikes”。可以具体说明哪些人骑车、通常去哪里,并用“because”或“for example”连接原因或例子,避免笼统地说“other places”。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people cycle to work or use bikes for short trips because they are convenient and affordable. They are also a fun way to get some exercise.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

句子描述的是小时候拥有自行车的经历,时间明确发生在过去,因此应使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”。

Vocabulario

Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
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