Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a bi when you were a child
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, in my country we have a long bike or buy a bike for go to the school and go to the walk.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: 你重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答是否有自行车;同时“bi”应为“bike”。先用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”明确作答,再补充一条具体信息,例如自行车的颜色、用途或和谁一起骑。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: 你有直接回答“是”,但后面的表达不够清楚。“for go”应改为“to go”或“for going”;“go to the walk”不符合这里的意思,可以说“go for a walk”或“get around”。请具体说明人们为什么骑自行车,并使用清晰的连接方式,例如“because”或“for example”。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students ride them to school because they are convenient and inexpensive. People also use bikes for short trips or to get some exercise.
× Yes, in my country we have a long bike or buy a bike for go to the school and go to the walk.
✓ Yes, in my country we have a long bike or buy a bike for going to school and going for walks.
介词 for 后面如果接动词,动词通常要用 -ing 形式,因此 for go 应改为 for going。这里表达一般意义上的上学,通常说 go to school,不加 the。
× Yes, in my country we have a long bike or buy a bike for go to the school and go to the walk.
✓ Yes, in my country we have a long bike or buy a bike for going to school and going for walks.
英语中表示“散步”通常说 go for a walk;表示经常散步也可以说 go for walks。原句中的 go to the walk 介词搭配错误,应改为 going for walks。