Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答小时候是否有自行车，再按时间顺序解释原因和后来发生的事。注意时态一致：讲童年经历时用过去时，例如“thought”“got older”“gave”；“ride a bike by myself”表达自然，但可将“very dangerous”换成更具体的“unsafe to ride alone”。

Ejemplo: Not really. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride a bike on my own when I was little. However, they gave me one as a birthday present when I got a bit older.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但后半部分有多处表达和语法问题，导致意思不清。把答案拆成两条清楚的理由：自行车方便避开高峰期拥堵；骑车有益健康。使用连接词“Also”连接理由，并注意说“avoid traffic jams”“cycling is good for their health”，不要把多个句子结构连在一起。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many of them cycle to school because it can be quicker than travelling by car during rush hour. Also, cycling is a convenient way to get some exercise and stay healthy.

× Not really, because my parents think it is very dangerous for me to ride a bike by myself.

✓ Not really, because my parents thought it was very dangerous for me to ride a bike by myself.

问题发生在过去（小时候），因此应使用过去时。将 think 改为 thought，并将 is 改为 was，使时态与问题中的过去时间一致。

× But when I get older, my parents give me a bicycle as a birthday gift.

✓ But when I got older, my parents gave me a bicycle as a birthday gift.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。将 get 改为 got，将 give 改为 gave。

× Yes, of course lots of students like to ride a bike to go to school and they think it's a wides a traffic jam when the peak time to go to school and other thing is people say riding bike is can do exercise is beneficial for their health

✓ Yes, of course. Lots of students like to ride bikes to school, and they think it's a way to avoid traffic jams during peak hours. Another thing is that people say riding a bike is beneficial for their health because it provides exercise.

可数名词 bike 前通常需要限定词，因此应说 a bike；泛指多辆自行车时也可以说 bikes。thing 是单数可数名词，前面需要限定词，所以这里用 Another thing。

× Yes, of course lots of students like to ride a bike to go to school and they think it's a wides a traffic jam when the peak time to go to school and other thing is people say riding bike is can do exercise is beneficial for their health

✓ Yes, of course. Lots of students like to ride bikes to school, and they think it's a way to avoid traffic jams during peak hours. Another thing is that people say riding a bike is beneficial for their health because it provides exercise.

原句把多个意思直接连在一起，且“it's a wides a traffic jam”和“other thing is people say”等部分缺少清晰、完整的句子结构。可将不同理由拆开，并用完整的主语和谓语表达，例如“it's a way to avoid traffic jams”和“Another thing is that people say...”。

× Yes, of course lots of students like to ride a bike to go to school and they think it's a wides a traffic jam when the peak time to go to school and other thing is people say riding bike is can do exercise is beneficial for their health

✓ Yes, of course. Lots of students like to ride bikes to school, and they think it's a way to avoid traffic jams during peak hours. Another thing is that people say riding a bike is beneficial for their health because it provides exercise.

情态动词 can 后面应直接接动词原形，不能在 can 前再加 is。表达“骑车有益健康，因为它能提供锻炼”时，可以说“it provides exercise”，避免使用错误的“is can do exercise”。