Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-21 16:49:47

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes I have a kill bike

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

In ten years ago I think Mai's are very popular in my country but now The bar nice increase

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.0Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 35.0

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes”, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu: dùng “had” thay cho “have”. Cụm “a kill bike” chưa rõ nghĩa; hãy dùng từ chính xác để mô tả chiếc xe, chẳng hạn “a small bike” hoặc “a kids’ bike”. Bạn có thể thêm một chi tiết ngắn về chiếc xe.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. It was red, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 20.0

Sugerencia: Bạn có nêu ý so sánh giữa quá khứ và hiện tại, nhưng câu trả lời khó hiểu do lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc. Hãy trả lời rõ quan điểm trước; dùng “ten years ago” (không dùng “in ten years ago”) và nói cụ thể mức độ phổ biến hiện nay đang tăng hay giảm. Có thể thêm một lý do hoặc ví dụ để phát triển ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They were common ten years ago, and their popularity has increased as more people use them for exercise and short trips.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I have a kill bike

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a time in the past: when you were a child. Use the past form had instead of have. The word kill does not fit grammatically here, so it has been omitted.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× In ten years ago I think Mai's are very popular in my country but now The bar nice increase

✓ Ten years ago, I think bikes were very popular in my country, but now their prices are increasing.

Do not use in before ten years ago; ago already expresses how long before the present the time was. I have interpreted Mai's as bikes and The bar nice increase as their prices are increasing, since those parts appear unclear in the transcript.

5: Past tense issue

× In ten years ago I think Mai's are very popular in my country but now The bar nice increase

✓ Ten years ago, I think bikes were very popular in my country, but now their prices are increasing.

Because the statement refers to ten years ago, use the past form were rather than are to describe the bikes' popularity at that time.

Vocabulario

Nice— Enjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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