Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yeah, absolutely when I was a child I had my bike honestly Chinese children all had a bike when they were a child and it can improve their curiosity and have had a lot of fun
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yeah, it really depends. For example, some child may likes riding a bike in their childhood because it helped them to have lots of fun but others may like playing another activities maybe playing Badminton or something else.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答自己小时候是否有自行车,再补充一两个具体细节。避免“所有中国孩子都有自行车”这类过于绝对的说法;注意时态一致,例如描述过去的经历时使用过去时。表达“带来很多乐趣”可说“it was a lot of fun”,表达“激发好奇心”可说“it encouraged me to explore”。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. It was a lot of fun and made me more confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 43.0Sugerencia: 回答应直接说明自行车在你所在国家是否普及,而不是只比较孩子喜欢的活动。补充具体理由或场景,例如通勤、锻炼或共享单车。注意语法:泛指复数用“some children”;情态动词“may”后接动词原形;“activities”是复数。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive. Cycling is also a popular way to exercise on weekends.
× Chinese children all had a bike when they were a child.
✓ Chinese children all had bikes when they were children.
主语是复数“children”,后面的“they”也指复数的孩子,因此应使用复数“children”,而不是单数“child”。“all had a bike”容易表示所有孩子共用一辆车;这里用“bikes”表达每个孩子都有自行车更清楚。
× It can improve their curiosity and have had a lot of fun.
✓ Bikes can improve their curiosity and help them have a lot of fun.
情态动词“can”后面要接动词原形。原句中的“have had”是现在完成时,不能直接与“can”搭配;应改为“have”。此外,自行车不能自己“have fun”,所以改为“help them have fun”,明确表示孩子们可以享受乐趣。
× Some child may likes riding a bike in their childhood, but others may like playing another activities.
✓ Some children may like riding a bike in their childhood, but others may like playing other activities.
“some”表示“一些”时,后面应接可数名词复数,因此“some child”应改为“some children”。“activities”是复数,不能与表示单数的“another”搭配;这里应使用“other activities”。
× Some child may likes riding a bike in their childhood.
✓ Some children may like riding a bike in their childhood.
情态动词“may”后面必须接动词原形,所以“may likes”应改为“may like”。第三人称单数形式“likes”不能放在情态动词“may”之后。