Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题，例如说明小时候有没有自行车；注意这里应说“bike”，不是“bank”。讲过去的经历时使用过去时，如“the roads were”，并将“is not suit for”改为“weren't suitable for”。可以补充一个具体原因或例子，例如交通拥挤让骑车不安全；减少重复和填充词，并用“because”连接理由。

Ejemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. The roads in Harbin were quite busy, so my parents didn't think it was safe for me to ride one.

Sugerencia: 开头已经给出肯定回答，但结尾没有说完；请明确说明人们更喜欢什么，例如骑自行车。将“pathway for bikes”换成更自然的“cycle lanes”，并注意主谓一致：“people care”。可以用“Also”或“because”连接城市设施与健康意识这两个理由，再补充一个简短的具体例子。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes have become more popular in recent years. Many cities have built cycle lanes, and people are more health-conscious, so they often cycle to work or for exercise.

× I don't have a bank when I was a child because in my hometown, Harbin, uh, the road is not suit for uh, bikes, especially for children to ride a bike 'cause uh, the traffic is, is uh, so messy.

✓ I didn't have a bank when I was a child because in my hometown, Harbin, uh, the road is not suit for uh, bikes, especially for children to ride a bike 'cause uh, the traffic is, is uh, so messy.

句子中的“when I was a child”明确表示过去，因此主句也应使用过去时。“don't have”是一般现在时，应改为一般过去时“didn't have”。这里仅调整时态；“bank”是否为想表达的词不属于所列语法问题类型，因此不作修改。

× I don't have a bank when I was a child because in my hometown, Harbin, uh, the road is not suit for uh, bikes, especially for children to ride a bike 'cause uh, the traffic is, is uh, so messy.

✓ I don't have a bank when I was a child because in my hometown, Harbin, uh, the road is not suitable for uh, bikes, especially for children to ride a bike 'cause uh, the traffic is, is uh, so messy.

“is”后面需要接形容词来描述道路是否适合骑车。这里应使用形容词“suitable”，而不是动词原形“suit”。可以记住结构“be suitable for + 名词/动名词”，表示“适合……”。

× In recent years, yes, because many cities have, uh, established the. Pathway for bikes and people cares more about their their health so they prefer.

✓ In recent years, yes, because many cities have, uh, established the. Pathway for bikes and people care more about their their health so they prefer.

“people”表示复数，谓语动词应使用原形“care”，不能加第三人称单数词尾“-s”。可注意先判断主语是单数还是复数，再选择动词形式。