Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 질문에 먼저 직접 답하고, 과거의 경험이므로 과거형을 사용하세요. ‘Guess I have it’은 의미가 불분명하고, 자전거의 특징을 설명할 때는 ‘three wheels’(바퀴 세 개)처럼 정확한 표현을 쓰는 것이 좋습니다. ‘small small’처럼 같은 단어를 반복하지 말고, 마지막의 미완성 표현은 완결된 문장으로 마무리하세요. 기억에 남는 경험이나 자전거를 어디서 탔는지 한 가지 덧붙이면 답변이 더 구체적입니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a small tricycle when I was about three years old. It had three wheels, so I could ride it safely both indoors and outside. I remember enjoying it a lot.

Sugerencia: 자전거가 전반적으로 인기가 있는지 먼저 명확히 답한 뒤, 이유와 예외를 연결해 설명하세요. ‘there is no the road for bikes’ 대신 ‘there aren’t many bike lanes’를, ‘dangerous to workers’ 대신 ‘dangerous for cyclists’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. ‘Han River’는 ‘along the Han River’라고 말할 수 있고, ‘there’s too many people ride bikes’는 ‘many people ride bikes’로 고치세요. 일반적인 상황과 한강 주변의 상황을 대비하면 답변의 논리가 더 분명해집니다.

Ejemplo: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country because there aren’t many bike lanes, which can make cycling dangerous. However, many people ride bikes along the Han River, where there are dedicated paths. So, cycling is more popular in certain areas.

× Guess I have it.

✓ I guess I had one.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense had rather than the present tense have. Include I as the subject, and one is clearer than it when referring to a bike you have not mentioned before.

× When I was three years old, I have a bike which has three hooks which is really small small

✓ When I was three years old, I had a bike which had three hooks and was really small.

This describes a situation in the past, so use had instead of have and was instead of is. Avoid repeating small. The correction also joins the descriptions more clearly.

× I can write it inside or outside and so I write

✓ I could write it inside or outside, so I wrote.

The sentence refers to what you did when you were a child, so the past forms could and wrote are appropriate. If you meant ride rather than write, use rode in the final clause; that would be a vocabulary correction rather than a grammar correction.

× Not that really

✓ Not really

Really should come directly after not in this expression. Say Not really to give a natural negative answer.

× there is no the road for bikes

✓ there are no roads for bikes

Do not use the after no when referring to roads in general. Roads is plural, so use are rather than is.

× there's too many people ride bikes

✓ there are too many people riding bikes

Use there are with the plural noun phrase too many people. Use riding to describe what those people are doing; ride cannot directly follow people in this there are construction.

× in Han River near Han River

✓ near the Han River

Use near to describe the location, and use the before the name of this river. Avoid repeating the same location phrase.