Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответьте прямо и уберите повторы и заполнители пауз вроде “umm”, “uh” и повторное “bike”. Используйте естественное выражение “when I was in kindergarten” и добавьте один конкретный факт о том, как вы учились кататься. Например, можно упомянуть помощь родителей или тренировочные колёса.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a small bike when I was in kindergarten. It was quite difficult to learn to ride it, so my parents helped me practise in the park.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте ясный ответ о своей стране: используйте “in my country”, а не “in my countries”. Уточните, что именно вы имеете в виду под “bikes” и “bicycles”, поскольку здесь эти слова обозначают одно и то же. Избегайте противоречия между тем, что велосипеды непопулярны, и тем, что они популярны в деревнях; объясните, где и почему ими пользуются. Свяжите мысль словами “although” или “for example” и исправьте сочетания “in small villages” и “go for a walk”.

Ejemplo: Bicycles aren’t especially popular in my country, although they are more common in small villages. People often use them for short trips or for exercise, rather than as their main way of getting around.

× I had the bike when I was a child, like when I was in the kindergarten, I had a small bike.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. When I was in kindergarten, I had a small bike.

Use a before bike when mentioning it for the first time; the suggests that the listener already knows which specific bike you mean. Kindergarten is generally used without the in this expression.

× Honestly in my countries they are not very popular ... in a small villages

✓ Honestly, in my country, they are not very popular ... in small villages

Use the singular country if you mean the country where you live. Also, a cannot be used with the plural noun villages. Say in small villages or in a small village.

× As for example in some Asian Asian countries

✓ For example, in some Asian countries

As for example is not a standard way to introduce an example. Use for example. The repeated word Asian is also unnecessary; avoid repeating words when speaking.

× when they go for walk

✓ when they go for a walk

The singular countable noun walk needs an article in this expression. The correct phrase is go for a walk.