Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
I admit that But in my opinion people who bikes people who bikes they have wings behind
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think it's popular actually every child would love bike and every child bike in in the streets you can see people who buy go to the work by bike or get to the school by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın; bisikletiniz olup olmadığını açıkça belirtin. Mevcut cevapta fikirler anlaşılmıyor ve “people who bikes” dilbilgisi açısından yanlış. Kısa, doğru cümleler kurup bisikletinizin rengi, ne zaman kullandığınız veya nerede sürdüğünüz gibi bir ayrıntı ekleyin.
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır, ancak “every child” ve “bike” tekrarları ile “people who buy” ifadesi cevabı karıştırıyor. Önce bisikletlerin popüler olduğunu net biçimde söyleyin; ardından çocukların ve işe ya da okula giden yetişkinlerin bisiklet kullandığını örnek verin. “Ride a bike” ve “go to work by bike” gibi doğru kalıplar kullanın.
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them in the streets, and some adults cycle to work or school because it’s convenient and affordable.
× I admit that But in my opinion people who bikes people who bikes they have wings behind
✓ I admit that, but in my opinion, people who bike have wings behind them.
In the relative clause people who bike, the subject people is plural, so the verb should be bike, not bikes. Match the verb form to the subject: people who bike.
× I admit that But in my opinion people who bikes people who bikes they have wings behind
✓ I admit that, but in my opinion, people who bike have wings behind them.
The phrase people who bikes is repeated, and adding they after people who bike creates a redundant subject. State the subject once and use a complete, clearly structured clause.
× Yes, I think it's popular actually every child would love bike and every child bike in in the streets you can see people who buy go to the work by bike or get to the school by bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are popular. Actually, every child would love a bike, and every child bikes in the streets. You can see people who go to work or school by bike.
The question asks about bikes, a plural noun, so they is more appropriate than it. Use a pronoun that agrees in number with the noun it refers to.
× Yes, I think it's popular actually every child would love bike and every child bike in in the streets you can see people who buy go to the work by bike or get to the school by bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are popular. Actually, every child would love a bike, and every child bikes in the streets. You can see people who go to work or school by bike.
Every child is grammatically singular, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular form bikes. Add -s to the verb when the subject is he, she, it, or a singular noun.
× Yes, I think it's popular actually every child would love bike and every child bike in in the streets you can see people who buy go to the work by bike or get to the school by bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are popular. Actually, every child would love a bike, and every child bikes in the streets. You can see people who go to work or school by bike.
Bike is a singular countable noun here, so it needs an article: a bike. In the general expressions go to work and go to school, the definite article the is not normally used.
× Yes, I think it's popular actually every child would love bike and every child bike in in the streets you can see people who buy go to the work by bike or get to the school by bike.
✓ Yes, I think they are popular. Actually, every child would love a bike, and every child bikes in the streets. You can see people who go to work or school by bike.
The sentence contains repeated words and an unclear sequence in people who buy go to work. Remove the unnecessary buy and separate the ideas into complete clauses. Use punctuation to make the sentence easier to follow.