Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中把“bike”误说成了“bag”，导致没有直接回答问题。请先明确说自己小时候有没有自行车，再补充是谁买的、它是什么样的，或你常用它做什么。注意“my parents”通常比“my parent”更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.

Sugerencia: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎，但“Everyone almost have it”语序和主谓一致有误，应说“Almost everyone has one”；“very cheaper”应改为“much cheaper”或“very cheap”。最后的“bite”应为“buy”，但“有能力购买”不太自然，可以解释自行车价格实惠、方便通勤，并举一个具体例子。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re relatively affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. For example, many people ride them to work or to nearby shops.

× Everyone almost have it.

✓ Almost everyone has a bike.

表示“几乎所有人”时，almost 应放在 everyone 前面，构成 almost everyone。建议把频率或程度副词放在它所修饰的词语附近。

× Everyone almost have it.

✓ Almost everyone has a bike.

Everyone 虽然表示多人，但语法上是单数，因此一般现在时中应使用 has，而不是 have。看到 everyone、someone、nobody 等主语时，注意谓语动词使用单数形式。

× Everyone almost have it.

✓ Almost everyone has a bike.

前文的 bikes 是复数，后面用 it 指代会造成单复数不一致。这里可以改用 them；更自然的表达是 everyone has a bike。建议检查代词是否与它所指代的名词在数上相符。

× Bikes are very cheaper.

✓ Bikes are much cheaper.

Cheaper 已经是比较级，不能用 very 修饰。比较级前可以用 much 修饰，因此应说 much cheaper。建议记住：very 常修饰原级形容词，如 very cheap；much 常修饰比较级，如 much cheaper。