Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Definitely, I have a bike when I was a child. When I was six years old, I get my first bag. I got my first bag from my aunt. She gave me a bike, a ride bike as my birthday gift.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Of course, back is the convenient transportation in China there are too many traffic jams in China as well. So when we made traffic, when we made traffic crowds, we could ride back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答“有”,并统一使用过去时:用“had”而不是“have”,“got”而不是“get”。注意“bag”应为“bike”;“a ride bike”表达不自然,可改为“a bike”或“a bicycle”。最后补充一条具体信息,例如你常在哪里骑车或那份礼物对你的意义。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike from my aunt when I was six, as a birthday present. I was really excited, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 32.0Sugerencia: 先清楚回答自行车在中国是否受欢迎,再说明原因。你想表达的“bike”应使用“bikes”,“back”不能代替“bike”;“made traffic crowds”不自然,可说“when traffic is heavy”或“to avoid traffic jams”。补充一个具体场景,例如短途通勤或骑共享单车,并用“because”或“for example”连接理由。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in busy cities. Because traffic jams are common, people often cycle for short journeys to avoid getting stuck in traffic. Shared bikes are also easy to find and convenient to use.
× Definitely, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Definitely, I had a bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是童年时的情况,属于过去时间;因此表示“拥有”的 have 应使用过去式 had。建议根据时间状语判断动词时态:描述过去的事情时,使用一般过去时。
× When I was six years old, I get my first bag.
✓ When I was six years old, I got my first bag.
“When I was six years old”明确表示过去的时间,因此 get 应改为过去式 got。建议叙述过去发生的事情时,让句中的主要动词与过去时间保持一致。