Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family didn't afford me so I usually worked or work at the go to school or by bus.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
No, the bike is not too popular in our country but in Lenton country bike is very public.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: 开头直接回答问题是好的,但后半部分有多处语法和表达错误。“家里买不起”应说“my family couldn't afford one”;描述过去的习惯要用过去时,例如“usually walked”或“usually went”。请明确说明你是步行还是乘公交上学,并用一个原因或细节补充答案。
Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school, although I sometimes took the bus when it was raining.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了对比,但“the bike”应改为泛指的“bikes”,“not too popular”在这里可换成更自然的“not very popular”。“Lenton country”和“very public”意思不清楚;如果想表达某个国家自行车很受欢迎,可以说“bikes are very popular in...”。建议补充一个具体原因或例子。
Ejemplo: Bikes aren’t very popular in my country, especially in large cities, because many people prefer to drive or take public transport. However, they are much more popular in the Netherlands, where cycling is a common way to get around.
× My family didn't afford me so I usually worked or work at the go to school or by bus.
✓ My family couldn't afford a bike for me, so I usually walked to school or took the bus.
这段话描述的是童年时期的情况,应使用过去时。原句中的“work”与“worked”时态不一致;应统一使用过去时。此外,“worked”在此处无法表达步行上学的意思。建议讲述过去经历时保持动词时态一致,并使用准确的动词表达出行方式。
× My family didn't afford me so I usually worked or work at the go to school or by bus.
✓ My family couldn't afford a bike for me, so I usually walked to school or took the bus.
原句中“didn't afford me”的结构不完整,“at the go to school or by bus”也无法构成正确的句子结构。可以说“couldn't afford a bike for me”(买不起自行车给我),并用“walked to school or took the bus”清楚表达两种出行方式。两个完整意思之间用逗号和“so”连接。
× No, the bike is not too popular in our country but in Lenton country bike is very public.
✓ No, bikes are not too popular in our country, but in Lenton country, bikes are very public.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,用复数“bikes”比单数“bike”更合适。原句第二个分句中的“bike”是可数名词单数,却没有限定词;改成复数“bikes”可以避免这个问题。泛指一类事物时,建议使用复数名词,并确保谓语动词也与复数主语一致。