Bike— Part 1 Informe

PrácticaPart12026-10-20 13:34:14

Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

No, actually I can't ride a bike because I have poor balance and I feel nervous on the road.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, I think so. When I go shopping or have a walk I will always say many riders on the road.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.5Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Puntuación: 74.0

Sugerencia: 回答有直接回应问题,也给出了具体原因。注意问题询问的是过去,因此可以用过去时表达童年时不会骑车;另外,“I have poor balance”略显生硬,可改为“I have a poor sense of balance”。可以补充一句说明自己是否因此没有自行车,但控制在五句以内。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I couldn’t ride one. I have a poor sense of balance, and I used to feel nervous riding near traffic.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 回答先表明了观点,但后面的细节有明显用词错误:“say”应为“see”,“have a walk”可改为“go for a walk”。“I will always see”不太自然,描述日常观察时可用一般现在时。建议补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因,例如通勤方便或有助于避开堵车。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling when I go shopping or take a walk, especially during rush hour, because bikes are a convenient way to get around.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, actually I can't ride a bike because I have poor balance and I feel nervous on the road.

✓ No, actually I couldn't ride a bike because I had poor balance and felt nervous on the road.

问题询问的是“小时候”是否有自行车,因此回答中的能力、身体状况和感受应使用过去时。将 can't 改为 couldn't,have 改为 had,feel 改为 felt,使时态与过去的时间背景一致。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× When I go shopping or have a walk I will always say many riders on the road.

✓ When I go shopping or have a walk, I always say that there are many riders on the road.

say 后面如果要表达“路上有很多骑车的人”,需要接完整的宾语从句:that there are many riders on the road。原句中的 say many riders 缺少从句所需的谓语结构。此外,这里描述经常发生的情况,用一般现在时 always say 比 will always say 更自然。

Vocabulario

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
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