Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答切题,也提到了自行车的颜色和一起骑车的家人。注意时态一致:描述童年经历时,have 应改为 had,like 可改为 liked 或 used to enjoy;orange 前使用 an。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或频率。
Ejemplo: Yes, I had an orange bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my brother and sister around our neighborhood, especially at the weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: 回答表达了共享单车普及且价格便宜的原因,但有几处语法和搭配问题:my country 后用 has;应说 shared bikes;motorcycle 前加 a;“come to somewhere”不自然,可用 get to places。建议拆分长句,并补充一个具体使用场景。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. They are inexpensive and easy to find, so people often use them for short trips when they don't have a motorcycle.
× Yes, I have a orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had an orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去,因此描述当时拥有自行车的动词应使用过去式“had”,而不是现在式“have”。
× Yes, I have a orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I have an orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
“orange”以元音音素开头,名词前应使用“an”,而不是“a”。
× Yes, I have a orange bike and I really like to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I have a orange bike and I really liked to ride my bike with my sister and brother when I was a child.
“when I was a child”指过去的时期,因此表示当时喜欢骑车的“like”也应使用过去式“liked”。
× Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
✓ Yes, my country has a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
主语“my country”是第三人称单数,且句子使用一般现在时,因此动词“have”应改为“has”。
× Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
✓ Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and they're very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
这里“it's”指前面的复数“bikes”,代词应使用复数“they”,并与“are”搭配,写作“they're”。
× Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
✓ Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have a motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
“motorcycle”是可数名词单数,前面需要限定词。此处泛指一辆摩托车,应加不定冠词“a”。
× Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
✓ Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use a share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
这里泛指可以使用任意一辆共享单车,不是特指某一辆,因此应使用不定冠词“a”,而不是定冠词“the”。
× Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to come to somewhere you want to go.
✓ Yes, my country have a lot of share bikes and it's very cheap so if you don't have motorcycle you can use the share bike to go somewhere you want to go.
“somewhere”本身是表示地点的副词,前面通常不加介词“to”。这里应直接说“go somewhere”。