Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yeah, Yeah, I did. I have a bike when I was a child. I used to ride around the city or to explore something. That's it's interesting. Yeah.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
MMM, it depends on. Because most of individuals that prefer transportation, public transportation or train or MRT depends on individuals, yeah.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答“有”,然后用过去时说明你骑车做什么或去哪里。注意过去的经历要用过去时,例如用“had”代替“have”;避免重复“Yes”和句尾的“Yeah”。“explore something”和“That's it's interesting”表达不自然,可以改成具体地点或感受。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. I especially enjoyed cycling to the park with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 明确回答自行车在你所在国家是否受欢迎,不要只说“It depends on”后就停顿;如果要表达因人而异,说明哪些人会骑、哪些人更常使用公共交通,并给出原因或场景。注意“it depends on”后需要补充具体内容,“most of individuals”不自然,可改为“many people”。
Ejemplo: I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in smaller cities and among people who live close to work or school. However, many people in big cities prefer the MRT or buses because they’re faster and more convenient.
× I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child.
句子描述的是童年时的经历,且“when I was a child”明确表示过去,因此应使用过去式“had”,而不是现在式“have”。
× That's it's interesting.
✓ That's interesting.
“That's”已经包含主语和系动词(That is),后面再加“it's”会造成结构重复。删去“it's”即可。
× It depends on.
✓ It depends.
“Depend on”后面通常需要接宾语;如果后面没有宾语,应直接说“It depends.”。
× Most of individuals that prefer transportation, public transportation or train or MRT depends on individuals.
✓ Most individuals who prefer public transportation, trains, or the MRT depend on individual preference.
“Most of”后面通常要接限定词,例如“most of the individuals”;如果名词前没有限定词,应使用“most individuals”。因此这里改为“Most individuals”。
× Most of individuals that prefer transportation, public transportation or train or MRT depends on individuals.
✓ Most individuals who prefer public transportation, trains, or the MRT depend on individual preference.
主语“most individuals”是复数,因此谓语动词应使用“depend”,不能使用单数形式“depends”。