Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，例如用“I didn’t have a bike”。注意时态：讲童年经历用过去时；表达“发生事故”可说“have an accident”。避免重复使用“because”，并补完整句子。可以说明祖母担心的原因，但控制在几句以内。

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My grandmother was worried that I might have an accident because my father had been injured in a bike accident when he was at school.

Sugerencia: 直接回答“自行车是否受欢迎”，并将“ride a bike”改为作主语时更自然的“cycling”或“riding bikes”。“a lot of local bikes”表达不清楚，可以具体说明很多人骑自行车、常见的骑行场景，或自行车的用途。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think cycling is quite popular in my country. You can see many people riding bikes in cities, especially when they commute to work or school.

× Now, I don't have a bike when I was a child

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child

这里描述的是童年时的情况，应使用一般过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”；“Now”与“when I was a child”所表达的过去时间不一致，建议删除。

× my grandmother was afraid I got an accident

✓ my grandmother was afraid I would get into an accident

奶奶当时担心的是我之后可能会发生事故，因此用“would”表达过去视角下的将来，比一般过去时“got”更合适。

× I got an accident

✓ I would get into an accident

表示“遭遇事故”时，常用搭配是“get into an accident”，不能说“get an accident”。注意记忆“get into an accident”这一固定表达。

× my father already have accident

✓ my father had already had an accident

这里说的是父亲在过去发生过的事情，应使用过去完成时“had already had”，表示该事故发生在奶奶担心之前。另外，“accident”是可数名词单数，前面需要加“an”。

× to ride a bike

✓ while riding a bike

这里表示事故发生时父亲正在骑车，应使用“while + 动词-ing”表示同时发生的动作。可以记忆表达：“have an accident while doing something”。

× when he was in school life

✓ when he was at school

“在上学时”通常说“at school”，不说“in school life”。建议积累“be at school”这一常用表达。

× So my grandmother was so scared that

✓ My grandmother was very scared.

“so...that...”结构中的“that”后面需要接结果从句；原句在“that”处中断，结构不完整。如果没有后续内容，可以改成完整句“My grandmother was very scared.”

× I think ride a bike is popular in my country.

✓ I think riding a bike is popular in my country.

“骑自行车”作句子的主语时，动词要使用动名词形式“riding”。建议记住：动词短语作主语时通常使用动词-ing形式。

× There's a lot of local bikes I can see.

✓ There are a lot of local bikes I can see.

“a lot of local bikes”是复数名词短语，因此There be句型应使用“are”，不能使用“is”。判断There be句型的动词形式时，要看后面的名词单复数。