Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. The bike is my parents bought for me and they hope I have a happy time. Time.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Almost every Chinese can ride a bike because their parents will teach them when they were young.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题,并统一使用过去时:把“have”改为“had”。“The bike is my parents bought for me”结构不正确,可说“my parents bought it for me”。接着补充一个具体回忆或用途;删除重复的“Time”,并注意回答控制在五句以内。
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答切题,也提供了原因,但“Almost every Chinese”过于绝对,建议改为“Many people in China”。注意主谓一致和时态:谈普遍情况可用“parents teach them”,也可用“are taught”。再补充一个具体例子,例如人们骑车通勤或使用共享单车,让内容更具体。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many people learn to ride when they are young, and cycling is still a convenient way to get around. In larger cities, people also use shared bikes for short trips.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
句子说的是“小时候”的经历,时间明确发生在过去,因此 have 应改为过去式 had。描述过去的事情时,要确保谓语动词使用相应的过去时。
× The bike is my parents bought for me
✓ The bike was bought for me by my parents.
原句把 is 和 my parents bought 两种结构错误地连在了一起。表达“自行车是父母给我买的”时,应使用被动语态:主语 + was + 过去分词 + by + 动作者。
× they hope I have a happy time
✓ They hoped I would have a happy time.
这里描述的是父母在过去买自行车时的想法,因此 hope 应改为过去式 hoped。表示过去的希望或愿望时,可以用 would 表示当时对之后情况的期待。
× Almost every Chinese can ride a bike because their parents will teach them when they were young.
✓ Almost every Chinese person can ride a bike because their parents teach them when they are young.
这句话描述的是普遍情况,应使用一般现在时。will teach 表示将来,与 when they were young(过去)不一致;此处应改为 teach 和 are。Chinese 作“一个中国人”时通常需要 person,因此改为 Chinese person。