Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, umm, I start to uh bike since I was about 10 or elevens around uh, just right after primary school and I bike to school during my middle school and high school.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, definitely yes. Lots of people enjoy biking in my countries and bike is especially popular among students because it's an it doesn't require license and it's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long. But you know,
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give one or two clear details. Use past tense consistently: say “I had,” “I started,” and “I rode.” Avoid fillers and correct “10 or elevens” to “about ten or eleven.”
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about ten, just after primary school, and rode it to school during middle and high school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason. Use “my country,” “bikes,” and “a license,” and say “suitable for short or long journeys” rather than “suitable for travel long distance or not that long.” Avoid restarting phrases and finish your answer instead of trailing off.
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They’re affordable and don’t require a license, so they’re a convenient way to get around, particularly for short trips to school or nearby shops.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The question asks about a past time, and the clause when I was a child is in the past. Use had rather than have to keep the verb tense consistent.
× I start to bike since I was about 10 or elevens around, just right after primary school.
✓ I started biking when I was about 10 or 11, just after primary school.
The speaker is describing when the habit began in the past, so use started. When is appropriate for a specific age; since usually introduces a starting point for an action that continues to the present.
× I start to bike since I was about 10 or elevens around, just right after primary school.
✓ I started biking when I was about 10 or 11, just after primary school.
Use 11, not elevens, when stating someone's age. Ages are expressed with the cardinal number, such as 10 or 11.
× I bike to school during my middle school and high school.
✓ I biked to school in middle school and high school.
The sentence describes a past routine, so use the past-tense form biked. In this context, in middle school and high school is also the natural way to refer to those periods.
× I bike to school during my middle school and high school.
✓ I biked to school in middle school and high school.
Use in to refer to the period when someone attended middle school or high school. During is generally used to describe something happening within a particular event or period.
× Lots of people enjoy biking in my countries.
✓ Lots of people enjoy biking in my country.
The sentence refers to the student's home country, so use the singular noun country, not the plural countries.
× Bike is especially popular among students.
✓ Biking is especially popular among students.
Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot normally be used without an article in this meaning. Using the activity noun biking avoids that article problem and expresses the intended general idea.
× Because it's an it doesn't require license.
✓ Because biking doesn't require a license.
The phrase it's an is an incomplete false start, and the following it creates a broken sentence structure. Use one clear subject, such as biking, followed by the verb phrase doesn't require.
× It doesn't require license.
✓ It doesn't require a license.
License is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before license.
× It's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long.
✓ It's very suitable for traveling long or short distances.
After the preposition for, use a gerund when describing the activity: traveling. A natural way to express both options is long or short distances.
× It's very suitable for travel long distance or not that long.
✓ It's very suitable for traveling long or short distances.
The sentence refers to distances in general, so use the plural distances. The paired expression long or short also makes the intended meaning clearer.