Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去经历要使用过去时，例如用“had”“rode”，而不是“buy”；“when I was a child”前要加冠词，“ride a bike”比“by bicycle”更自然。避免重复词和未完成的句子，并把“对健康有好处”表达为“good for my health”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and to the park because it was fun and good for my health.

Sugerencia: 观点可以更明确，不要用“maybe”削弱回答。说明自行车受欢迎的原因时，可以提到价格便宜、交通拥堵或方便等具体因素。注意名词表达和比较结构：用“bikes are cheaper than cars”，并说“choose to ride a bike”，而不是“choose by bicycle”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They are cheaper than cars and can be convenient in heavy traffic, so some people ride them to work or school.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

child 是单数可数名词，前面需要加冠词。这里应使用不定冠词 a。

× I always buy bicycle, go to the park and go to school

✓ I always rode a bicycle to the park and to school

这段话描述的是童年时的经历，应用过去时。buy、go 应改为过去时；结合上下文，用 rode 表示骑车更符合原意。

× I always buy bicycle

✓ I always rode a bicycle

bicycle 是单数可数名词，前面需要使用冠词 a。

× by bicycle is interesting

✓ Riding a bicycle is interesting

这里需要用“骑自行车”这个动作作主语，应使用动名词短语 Riding a bicycle。by bicycle 表示“乘坐自行车出行”的方式，不能直接充当这里的动作主语。

× good for my healthy

✓ good for my health

my 后面需要接名词。healthy 是形容词，health 是名词，因此应说 good for my health。

× bicycles price is cheaper than car, bus and another taxi

✓ The price of bicycles is lower than that of cars, buses, and taxis.

原句把“自行车的价格”和“汽车、公交车、出租车”这些交通工具直接比较，比较对象不一致。应比较价格与价格，用 that of 指代前面的 the price；此外，表示一般类别时，cars、buses 和 taxis 用复数更自然。

× some people will choose by bicycle, go to work, go to school

✓ Some people will choose to travel by bicycle to work or school.

choose 后面需要接合适的补足结构。原句直接接 by bicycle，结构不完整；可以用 choose to travel by bicycle，表示“选择骑自行车出行”。