Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I think my parents bought me and I like to use it.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, I think bags are very popular in my country, many students and teenagers choosing psych true school or to the park because it's very convenient and cheap.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充父母何时买的、你如何使用或当时的感受。注意时态:谈童年经历时用过去时,例如“bought”和“used”;“bought me”后面需要说明买了什么,或改成“bought me a bike”。
Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one when I was about six, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 回答中“bags”与问题不符,应该是“bikes”;后半句有多处表达不清,建议使用清楚、完整的句子说明谁骑车、去哪里以及原因。可用“Many students ride bikes to school or to the park”表达,并用“because”连接理由。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and teenagers. Many of them ride to school or to the park because cycling is convenient and inexpensive.
× Yes, I think my parents bought me and I like to use it.
✓ Yes, I think my parents bought me a bike, and I liked using it.
问题问的是你小时候的情况,因此回答中描述过去的喜好时,应该将现在时 like 改为过去时 liked。
× Yes, I think my parents bought me and I like to use it.
✓ Yes, I think my parents bought me a bike, and I liked using it.
在 bought me 后面缺少被买的东西,导致句意不完整。结合问题语境,可补充 a bike,表示“父母给我买了一辆自行车”。
× Yes, I think bags are very popular in my country, many students and teenagers choosing psych true school or to the park because it's very convenient and cheap.
✓ Yes, I think bags are very popular in my country. Many students and teenagers choose to go to school or to the park because it is very convenient and cheap.
逗号后面的部分缺少完整的谓语结构:choosing 是非谓语形式,不能单独充当这个句子的谓语。应改为 choose,并补上 to go,构成完整表达。另外,前后是两个完整句子,不能只用逗号连接,应使用句号分开。