Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, my mother bought me one is a second hand bicycle from the person. I didn't know who it is, but is a very kind sister, is a very kind and sweet home. Ah, my parents bought that for me from them.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yeah, spicy's been popular in my country since decades ago.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去时和句子结构:可说“my mother bought me a second-hand bike”,不要把“one”和“bicycle”重复使用。原回答中“from the person”“a very kind sister”“a very kind and sweet home”等表达含义不清,建议删去;也要避免重复,并说明自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a second-hand bike when I was about eight. It was a little old, but I loved riding it around our neighbourhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 直接回答“是”或“不是”,并用一个具体原因或例子展开。注意题目问的是 bikes,回答时要使用准确的词;“since decades ago”不自然,可以改为“for decades”或“since the 1990s”。建议补充人们骑车的场景或原因,让答案更完整。
Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.
× Yes, my mother bought me one is a second hand bicycle from the person.
✓ Yes, my mother bought me a second-hand bicycle from someone.
原句中“bought me one is a second hand bicycle”把两个结构错误地连接在一起。可以直接说“bought me a second-hand bicycle”。此外,后文表示说话者不知道那个人是谁,因此用“someone”比“the person”更合适。
× I didn't know who it is
✓ I didn't know who it was.
主句使用过去时“didn't know”,从句描述当时不知道的身份,通常也要使用过去时“was”,以保持时态一致。
× but is a very kind sister, is a very kind and sweet home.
✓ but she was a very kind sister, and she was very kind and sweet.
两个分句中的谓语“is”前都缺少主语。应补上“She”,并结合前文过去时把“is”改为“was”。原句中的“a very kind and sweet home”结构和语义不清,因此没有保留这一片段。
× Yeah, spicy's been popular in my country since decades ago.
✓ Yeah, bikes have been popular in my country for decades.
这里按上下文将“spicy's”理解为“bikes”。“bike”指多辆自行车时应使用复数“bikes”。注意:“bikes”作复数主语时,谓语也要使用“have”。
× Yeah, spicy's been popular in my country since decades ago.
✓ Yeah, bikes have been popular in my country for decades.
“decades”表示一段时间,和现在完成时连用时应使用“for”。“since”后面通常接具体的起始时间点,例如“since 2010”,不能直接接“decades”。
× Yeah, spicy's been popular in my country since decades ago.
✓ Yeah, bikes have been popular in my country for decades.
按上下文将主语理解为复数“bikes”时,谓语应使用“have”,而不是单数形式“has”。复数主语和谓语动词要在人称和数上保持一致。