Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 最初に「Yes, I did.」と答えられている点はよいです。その後は言い直しを減らし、「友達の家へ行くときに自転車を使っていた」と過去形で一度だけ伝えましょう。「my friend’s house」のように所有格を使い、必要なら距離や頻度などの具体的な情報を加えてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to my friend’s house when I was a child. It was only a short ride, but I enjoyed it.

Sugerencia: 自転車が人気かどうかについて、肯定・否定のどちらかを明確にしてから理由を述べましょう。「I don’t think bikes are widely used for transportation in Japan」のように表現できます。また、「the lower is narrow」は意味が伝わりにくいため、「the roads are narrow」と言い、必要なら都市部では自転車が便利などの対比を加えてください。文を途中で終わらせず、結論まで述べましょう。

Ejemplo: I think bikes are fairly popular in Japan, especially for short trips. However, they are not always the most convenient way to travel in busy cities because some roads are narrow. Many people use them to go to nearby shops or train stations.

× When I would go to the friend, go to the friend house, I use it.

✓ When I went to a friend's house, I used it.

The question asks about a past experience, so use past-tense verbs. Use went instead of would go here and used instead of use. Would go can describe a repeated past habit, but went is a clearer fit for this answer.

× When I would go to the friend, go to the friend house, I use it.

✓ When I went to a friend's house, I used it.

The original contains a repeated, unfinished phrase. Give the answer as one complete sentence, and use a friend's house to show whose house you mean.

× I don't believe that that bike bike is not I did I the bike is not popular in the transportation means because the Japan Japan in Japan, the lower is narrow, so.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular as a means of transportation in Japan because the roads there are narrow.

When speaking about bicycles in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike. The correction also uses the plural verb are to agree with bikes.

× I don't believe that that bike bike is not I did I the bike is not popular in the transportation means because the Japan Japan in Japan, the lower is narrow, so.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular as a means of transportation in Japan because the roads there are narrow.

Use a before the singular countable phrase a means of transportation. Do not use the before the country name Japan. The correction removes these unnecessary articles.