Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, 과거형과 동명사 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 과거의 소유는 “I had”, 과거의 상태는 “I was a child”라고 말하고, “enjoy” 뒤에는 동사-ing 형태를 사용하세요(“enjoyed riding”). “with my families”는 가족 구성원들을 뜻한다면 “with my family”가 자연스럽습니다. 과거 경험과 현재의 취미를 두 문장으로 나누어 간결하게 말해 보세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it with my family. These days, I still enjoy cycling along the river near my home.

Sugerencia: 의견을 먼저 제시하고 서울의 사례를 든 점은 적절하지만, “ride riding”처럼 동사 형태가 겹치고 “people using”에는 동사가 빠져 있습니다. “because” 뒤에는 완전한 문장을 쓰고, 자전거를 교통수단으로 이용한다는 뜻은 “use bikes as a means of transport” 또는 “cycle to work”로 표현하세요. “lever”는 강을 뜻하는 “river”인지 확인하고, 사람들이 어디에서 어떻게 자전거를 타는지 구체적으로 설명하면 답변이 더 명확해집니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in South Korea, especially in Seoul. Many people cycle along the river for exercise, while others use bikes to commute to work.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than has. Had is the past form of have.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

The past-tense verb must agree with the subject I. Use was, not were, with I in this sentence.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Say a child.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

Enjoy is followed by a gerund, the -ing form of a verb, not to plus a verb. Say enjoyed riding and enjoy riding.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

In this context, you mean your family as a single group, so use the singular family rather than families.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were child and I really enjoyed to riding a bike with my families and nowadays also I really enjoy to riding a bike nearby the river.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding a bike with my family. Nowadays, I also really enjoy riding a bike near the river.

Use near before a place in this sentence. Nearby generally functions as an adverb or adjective, so nearby the river is not the appropriate construction here.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in Seoul so many people ride riding a bike along the lever and so many people using to transport, riding a bike go to work.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because so many people in Seoul ride bikes along the river, and many people use bikes for transportation and ride them to work.

Ride should be followed by a noun here, not another -ing form. Say ride bikes, not ride riding a bike.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in Seoul so many people ride riding a bike along the lever and so many people using to transport, riding a bike go to work.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because so many people in Seoul ride bikes along the river, and many people use bikes for transportation and ride them to work.

The phrases so many people using to transport and riding a bike go to work do not form complete, well-structured clauses. Use a subject followed by a finite verb, such as many people use bikes and ride them to work.