Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use the past tense accurately: say “I used to have one.” Add one specific detail about how you used it as a child. Avoid fillers such as “you know,” “and stuff,” and “just yeah,” and make the contrast with your current habits clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. I don’t cycle as much now because public transport is more convenient for getting around.

Sugerencia: Answer the question about your country rather than making a claim about the whole world. Use the plural form “bikes are,” and give a realistic, specific reason or example to support your opinion. Remove the unclear phrase “so I’ll say goodbye” and avoid exaggerated claims such as “everyone.”

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with dedicated cycle lanes. Many people use them to commute or exercise because cycling is affordable and helps them stay active.

× I used to hat one back when I was a kid, but now as I grow older, I don't see the point because now you know with different ways of transportation and stuff just yeah

✓ I used to have one back when I was a kid, but now that I’m older, I don’t see the point because we have different means of transportation.

The clause after because is incomplete: you know with different ways of transportation does not form a complete idea. Follow because with a complete clause that has a subject and a verb. The correction also treats hat as the intended word have; that is a spelling correction, not a separate grammar issue.

× Bikes is very popular all around the world because every single day you just wake up and you see everyone riding their bike as an exercise for every morning, every night, so I'll say goodbye.

✓ Bikes are very popular all around the world because every single day you wake up and see everyone riding their bike as exercise every morning and every night, so I’ll say goodbye.

Bikes is a plural subject, so it requires the plural verb are, not is. Check whether the subject is singular or plural before choosing the verb form.

× Bikes is very popular all around the world because every single day you just wake up and you see everyone riding their bike as an exercise for every morning, every night, so I'll say goodbye.

✓ Bikes are very popular all around the world because every single day you wake up and see everyone riding their bike as exercise every morning and every night, so I’ll say goodbye.

For is not needed before every morning and every night in this sentence. Use the time expressions directly, as in exercise every morning and every night.