Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答有提到自行车是父亲送的礼物，但句子不完整，代词和动词使用也不准确，例如“Father followed a bike for me”和“She paid”。建议先直接回答“有”，再说明父亲何时、为什么送你自行车；如果记得价格或自行车的特点，可以用一两句补充。注意不要加入听不清或无法表达的词，并控制在五句以内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was in middle school because I had done well at school. It cost about 600 yuan, and I was really excited because it was a gift I had earned.

Sugerencia: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎，也提到了上学方便、环保，这是切题的理由。不过，描述街上的人时句子难以理解，“As for the crime”与上下文不连贯，且有重复和语法错误。建议先明确回答，再用准确的表达说明哪些人在骑车、骑车有什么好处；可以用“for example”连接具体例子。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people riding them on the streets, especially students travelling to school. They are convenient for short journeys and are also an environmentally friendly way to get around.

× Father followed a bike for me at my middle school.

✓ Father followed a bike for me when I was in middle school.

表示“我上初中时”应使用时间表达 when I was in middle school；at my middle school 表示在学校这个地点，不能准确表达这里的时间含义。

× She paid about a boat 600 uh, because I get the, uh, very pretty.

✓ He paid about a boat 600 uh, because I get the, uh, very pretty.

前文提到 Father，后文又用 he 指代，因此这里的 She 与所指对象不一致，应改为 He。其余部分含义不清，无法在不猜测原意的情况下可靠修改。

× She paid about a boat 600 uh, because I get the, uh, very pretty.

✓ She paid about a boat 600 uh, because I got the, uh, very pretty.

上下文是在讲童年时发生的事情，动词应使用过去时，因此 get 应改为 got。不过该句后半部分含义不清；此处仅针对可辨认的时态错误进行修改。

× Yes, on the street, I always say a lot of people she's driving in the back a lot of bike.

✓ Yes, on the street, I always say a lot of people she's driving in the back a lot of bikes.

a lot of 后接可数名词复数时，bike 应改为 bikes。句中其他部分表达不清，因此不对其含义作推测性修改。