Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes I did and I have a small pig bike that my parents bought me when I was eight and I used to ride it to the park with my friend on weekends it was a great experience and a good way to have fun
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I think bikes are popular in Taiwan, especially in cities. Bitco are cheap and convenient for short trips for example many students and office workers ride bikes to get to school or work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意时态:讲童年经历时应使用过去时,所以把“have”改为“had”;“small pig bike”可能是想说“small pink bike”。句子较长,建议用连接词并拆分,且“my friend”可根据实际情况改为“my friends”。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike that my parents bought for me when I was eight. I used to ride it to the park with my friends on weekends, and it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 66.0Sugerencia: 观点表达清楚,也提供了相关例子。注意“Bitco”应为“Bikes”,并在“For example”前加句号或分号。可以进一步说明自行车适合短途出行的原因,并避免把“popular”简单重复为“cheap and convenient”以外的泛泛描述。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Taiwan, especially in urban areas. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips, as traffic can be heavy in cities. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work.
× Yes I did and I have a small pig bike that my parents bought me when I was eight and I used to ride it to the park with my friend on weekends it was a great experience and a good way to have fun.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a small pig bike that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to the park with my friend on weekends. It was a great experience and a good way to have fun.
这段话描述的是童年时期的经历,时间背景是过去,因此应将表示拥有的“have”改为过去式“had”。“bought”和“used to ride”已经使用了合适的过去时。回答过去经历时,要注意保持时态一致。