Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details about the bike or how you used it. The phrase “my 12th buddy came” is unclear; if you mean your twelfth birthday, say “on my twelfth birthday.” Correct the tense in “A lot of time I spend” to “I spent a lot of time,” and avoid repeated or confusing phrases such as “went to the went to the schools” and “thinking about my wife.” Keep the answer within five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a blue bike for my twelfth birthday, and I was thrilled because it was my first one. I rode it around our neighborhood almost every day, especially after school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and support it with a specific reason or example. Use “an easy way to get around” rather than “a easy way to communicate,” and say “they are affordable for everyone” instead of “it’s a cheap and affordable for the everyone.” Avoid repeating “from one place to another” and making a broad claim about every country. Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes if the word “bikes” could be ambiguous.

Ejemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. They’re an affordable way to get around, and they’re useful for short trips to work or nearby shops. In busy areas, though, many people prefer public transport because of the traffic.

× A lot of time I spend with my bike.

✓ I spent a lot of time with my bike.

The speaker is describing a childhood memory, so the past-tense verb spent is needed instead of the present-tense spend. In past-tense narratives, use the past form of the verb for completed activities.

× You know, when I went to the went to the schools and the whole time in the school I was just thinking about my wife.

✓ You know, when I went to school, I was thinking about my wife the whole time.

The phrase went to school refers to attending school in general, so it normally does not take the. The original also repeats went to, which can be removed when giving the corrected sentence. Use the whole time to express the duration of the thought.

× When I get home, I will ride my bike.

✓ When I got home, I would ride my bike.

The sentence describes a repeated habit during childhood, so the past-tense form got and the habitual past form would ride fit the context. Use would plus the base verb to describe a repeated action in the past.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it's a easy way to communicate, commute from one place to another place and it's a cheap and affordable for the everyone no matter you are rich or poor.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy way to commute from one place to another, and they are affordable for everyone, whether they are rich or poor.

Use an before easy because easy begins with a vowel sound. Do not use a before everyone, because everyone does not take an article. The correction also removes a before affordable because affordable is an adjective and is not followed by a noun in the original phrase.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it's a easy way to communicate, commute from one place to another place and it's a cheap and affordable for the everyone no matter you are rich or poor.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy way to commute from one place to another, and they are affordable for everyone, whether they are rich or poor.

The pronoun it does not clearly agree with the plural subject bikes. Use they to refer back to bikes. In the final clause, they can also refer to people in general.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it's a easy way to communicate, commute from one place to another place and it's a cheap and affordable for the everyone no matter you are rich or poor.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy way to commute from one place to another, and they are affordable for everyone, whether they are rich or poor.

Use whether in the expression whether they are rich or poor to introduce two alternatives. No matter normally needs a word such as whether or how before a clause in this construction.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it's a easy way to communicate, commute from one place to another place and it's a cheap and affordable for the everyone no matter you are rich or poor.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy way to commute from one place to another, and they are affordable for everyone, whether they are rich or poor.

The phrase it's a cheap and affordable is incomplete because a requires a singular noun after it, but no noun follows. Restructure it as they are affordable, or add a noun such as an affordable option. The revised sentence also makes the ideas and clause structure clear.