Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答方向明确，但有多处语法和表达错误，影响理解。将“hit a red bike”改为“had a red bike”；用“When I was seven, my father bought it for me”说明时间和购买者。注意代词一致，并避免把自行车说成“exercise”；可以说骑车是一种很好的锻炼。建议用一到两句补充骑车的经历或感受。

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I had a red bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was seven, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood because it was fun and great exercise.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点和原因，但部分搭配不自然且信息重复。“most of people”应改为“most people”；“ride a bike to walk or study”不符合语境，可改为“ride bikes to work or school”。“cost-effective price”和“very cheap”意思重复，保留一个即可，并用具体场景补充说明。

Ejemplo: Definitely. Bikes are quite popular in China, especially in cities, because they’re affordable and convenient. Many people ride them to work or school, particularly for short trips.

× At 7 years old that was my father bought it for me and they're really into riding a bike because he is a very, umm, fantastic exercise for me.

✓ When I was seven years old, my father bought it for me, and I was really into riding a bike because it was great exercise for me.

“that was my father bought it for me”句子结构不完整且不符合英语表达习惯。表示“我七岁时”可说“When I was seven years old”，后面直接接“my father bought it for me”。

× At 7 years old that was my father bought it for me and they're really into riding a bike because he is a very, umm, fantastic exercise for me.

✓ When I was seven years old, my father bought it for me, and I was really into riding a bike because it was great exercise for me.

这里谈论的是学生自己，却使用了“they're”；“he”也不能指代骑车这项活动。应分别使用“I”指说话者，并用“it”指骑车这件事。

× At 7 years old that was my father bought it for me and they're really into riding a bike because he is a very, umm, fantastic exercise for me.

✓ When I was seven years old, my father bought it for me, and I was really into riding a bike because it was great exercise for me.

句子描述的是童年经历，时间背景在过去，因此应使用过去时。把“they're”和“is”分别改为“was”，以保持时态一致。

× Definitely, I think bikes are prevalent in China because most of people choose to ride a bike to walk or study due to its cost effective price and it's very cheap and convenient.

✓ Definitely, I think bikes are prevalent in China because most people choose to ride a bike to walk or study due to its cost-effective price, and it's very cheap and convenient.

“most”后面直接接可数名词复数时，不加“of”。因此应说“most people”，而不是“most of people”。如果使用“most of”，后面通常需要限定词，例如“most of the people”。

× Definitely, I think bikes are prevalent in China because most of people choose to ride a bike to walk or study due to its cost effective price and it's very cheap and convenient.

✓ Definitely, I think bikes are prevalent in China because most people choose to ride a bike to walk or study due to their cost-effective price, and they are very cheap and convenient.

“bikes”是复数，因此指代这些自行车时应使用复数代词“they”及其所有格“their”，而不是单数形式“it”及“its”。