Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”，并用过去时描述童年经历：将“I have”改为“I had”，“try”改为“tried”。“it was around 6 years old”不清楚是指你几岁还是自行车的年龄；如果指你当时的年龄，可以说“When I was about six”。最后的“I cannot”意思不完整，可以具体说明你后来是否学会骑车。减少“uh”等填充词，并用连接词组织补充细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about six, and my father taught me how to ride it. It was quite difficult at first, but I kept practising and eventually learned.

Sugerencia: 开头应直接回答“是的，很受欢迎”，并使用“bikes are popular”或“cycling is popular”，而不是“Bite is good”。补充细节时，可以举出通勤和共享单车两个具体例子；注意主谓一致，例如“many people ride”。“anywhere in the street”不够自然，可改为“at bike-sharing stations around the city”。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. Also, public bike-sharing schemes make it easy to rent a bike around the city.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，应用一般过去时。have 的过去式是 had，因此应将 have 改为 had。

× And after that I just try a little bit.

✓ And after that I just tried a little bit.

这里是在叙述过去发生的事情，动词 try 应使用过去式 tried。

× I cannot.

✓ I couldn't.

这句话承接的是童年时学骑车的经历，表达过去没有能力做到某事，应使用表示过去能力的 couldn't，而不是表示现在情况的 cannot。

× Bite is a particularly, uh, especially good in my country.

✓ Bikes are especially good in my country.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数主语 bikes。复数主语要搭配 are，不能使用 is。

× We could rent a bike anywhere in the street.

✓ We could rent a bike anywhere on the street.

表达在街上或街边可以租车时，通常使用介词 on，而不是 in。