Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也补充了收到自行车和学骑车的经历，但有几处明显语法和用词错误：应将“bite”改为“bike”；“as a gift of my twelve years old birthday”可改为“as a gift for my twelfth birthday”；“started to learning”应改为“started learning”或“started to learn”。建议先直接回答，再用一两句补充具体经历。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I really wanted a bike, and I got one as a gift for my twelfth birthday. After that, I learned to ride it in my neighborhood with my friends.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，也提到了自行车便宜、方便这一原因，但注意主谓一致：如果说“bikes”，后面应使用“they’re”；“major cities streets”应改为“the streets of major cities”；“often”重复了一次。“take a short bike”不自然，可用“cycle a short distance”；“subway station”前需加冠词或改为复数。建议补充一个清楚、具体的使用场景。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They’re affordable and convenient, so many people cycle short distances to a nearby subway station or their workplace.

× I really wanted to have a bite in my childhood and I received it as a gift of my twelve years old birthday.

✓ I really wanted to have a bite in my childhood, and I received it as a gift on my twelfth birthday.

语法问题类型：介词使用错误。“在某人的生日”通常用介词 on，因此应将 “of my ... birthday” 改为 “on my ... birthday”。表示“第十二个生日”时，应使用序数词 “twelfth”。

× Since then I started to learning how to ride a bike in my neighborhood with my friends.

✓ Since then I started learning how to ride a bike in my neighborhood with my friends.

语法问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式。“start”后可接动词的 -ing 形式（started learning），也可接不定式（started to learn），但不能使用 “to learning”。

× Definitely it's popular in our country, especially in major cities streets because it's cheap and convenient.

✓ Definitely, bikes are popular in our country, especially on the streets of major cities, because they are cheap and convenient.

语法问题类型：代词使用错误。这里的 “bikes” 是复数，因此应使用复数代词 “they”，并搭配 “are”，不能用单数的 “it”和 “is”。

× Definitely it's popular in our country, especially in major cities streets because it's cheap and convenient.

✓ Definitely, bikes are popular in our country, especially on the streets of major cities, because they are cheap and convenient.

语法问题类型：介词使用错误。“在街道上”通常说 “on the streets”；表示“主要城市的街道”可说 “the streets of major cities”，不应说 “in major cities streets”。

× People often often take a short bike to subway station or nearby office.

✓ People often often take a short bike to a subway station or a nearby office.

语法问题类型：冠词错误。“subway station”和“office”都是此处的单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里用 “a” 表示泛指，因此应说 “a subway station” 和 “a nearby office”。