Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提到了自行车属于全家以及学习骑车的经历。注意使用过去时：把“don't have”改为“didn't have”；“double sized bike”不够自然，可说“a bike that my family shared”。“exciting, exciting and nervous”有重复且形容词搭配不准确，可改为“exciting and a little nerve-racking”。最后一句没有说完，建议补充一个完整的具体细节，例如骑车地点或当时的感受，并控制在5句以内。

Ejemplo: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child; my family shared one. I learned to ride it when I was quite young, and I remember feeling both excited and a little nervous. We often rode it around our neighborhood at weekends.

Sugerencia: 开头直接回答了问题，并给出了便利、适合短途和价格实惠等理由，内容较充分。建议将“from school to home”改为更自然的“to and from school”，并用“short distances”表达“短距离”；可用“Moreover”连接补充理由，避免句首用“And”。最后的“many workers will”是未完成的句子，需要补充完整，或直接删去。

Ejemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient for getting to and from school or work, and they’re relatively inexpensive, so most people can afford one. Moreover, cycling can help people avoid traffic jams.

× Actually I don't have my own bike it was a family bike.

✓ Actually, I didn't have my own bike; it was a family bike.

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此回答应使用过去时。这里的“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。另外，原句中的两个完整分句之间缺少标点，已用分号连接。

× It's a double sized bike.

✓ It was a double-sized bike.

这句话描述的是小时候的自行车，应与上下文保持过去时一致，所以将“It's”改为“It was”。复合形容词“double-sized”通常加连字符。

× Yes, they are very popular because it's very convenient to ride from school to home or from home to work, especially for the short distance and they are not very expensive, so most people can afford them.

✓ Yes, they are very popular because it's very convenient to ride from school to home or from home to work, especially for short distances, and they are not very expensive, so most people can afford them.

这里泛指骑车适合的短距离，不是某一个特定距离，因此用复数“distances”更恰当。