Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then explain who gave you the bike and why. Use the past tense correctly (for example, “bought me”), say “when I was three,” and use “learn to ride a bike” rather than “practice through riding bike.” Avoid repeating words and finish your final thought instead of leaving it incomplete.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was little. My mother bought me one when I was three so I could learn to ride. It was a lovely experience, and I enjoyed practicing with her.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear answer and remove the unclear phrase “The pointer.” Use “their health” and “choose to ride bikes every day.” Add one specific example to support your reason, and avoid ending with the unfinished phrase “It’s for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to stay healthy, especially in parks and along rivers. For example, I often see people cycling for exercise on weekends.

× ...because she sought to practice through riding bike bike.

✓ ...because she sought to practice through riding a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article in this context. Use a bike, or use the plural form bikes when speaking generally.

× It's good experience for me...

✓ It was a good experience for me...

Experience is a singular countable noun here, so it needs the article a. Was also fits the past-time context of talking about a childhood experience.

× ...because it.

✓ ...because it was a memorable experience.

The clause is incomplete because because introduces a reason, but the sentence does not explain that reason. Complete the thought with a subject and a verb, or remove because.

× ...many people who are concerned about own health.

✓ ...many people who are concerned about their own health.

The noun phrase needs a possessive determiner to show whose health is meant. Use their to refer back to many people.

× ...many people who choose riding bike...

✓ ...many people who choose to ride bikes...

Choose is normally followed by a to-infinitive when describing a decision or preference. Use choose to ride, not choose riding, in this sentence.

× ...choose riding bike in every single day.

✓ ...choose to ride bikes every single day.

The preposition in is not used before every day when it means each day. Remove in; every single day can directly indicate how often the activity happens.

× It's for example.

✓ For example, many people choose to ride bikes every day.

This is an incomplete and unclear sentence because it does not explain what the example is. Follow for example with a complete clause.