Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сначала дайте прямой ответ, затем кратко расскажите, когда и кто купил велосипед. Фраза «with letters and sports car» звучит неясно: уточните, что именно было изображено или написано на велосипеде. Избегайте повторов, слов-паразитов и незаконченных предложений; добавьте одну конкретную причину, почему велосипед вам понравился.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a new bike when I was in first grade. It was green and had a picture of a sports car on it. I was really excited because it was my first bike.

Sugerencia: Ответьте на вопрос прямо и используйте грамматически правильную конструкцию: «Bikes are very popular», а не «I am Bikes is». Не повторяйте одну и ту же мысль о популярности в стране и во всём мире. Подкрепите ответ конкретным наблюдением из вашей страны, например тем, кто и где ездит на велосипедах; завершите мысль, не обрывая предложение.

Ejemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller towns. Many people ride them to school or work because they are convenient and inexpensive. In larger cities, though, traffic can make cycling less appealing.

× It was a green bike with an uh, like letters and sports car.

✓ It was a green bike with, uh, letters and a sports-car design.

The noun phrase sports car is singular and countable, so it needs an article. The revised phrase also makes clear that the bike had a sports-car design.

× Yes, I think I am Bikes is very popular in my country

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Bikes is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is. I am is also unnecessary in this sentence. Use the plural subject directly: bikes are.

× Bikes popular almost around the whole world

✓ Bikes are popular all around the world.

The sentence is missing the verb are. In the present simple, a plural subject such as bikes needs are before the adjective popular.

× every child wants own bike

✓ Every child wants their own bike.

The possessive determiner their is needed before own bike. Every child is grammatically singular, but singular they is commonly used when the person's gender is unknown.

× they enjoy with them

✓ They enjoy them.

Enjoy is a transitive verb and takes its object directly; it is not followed by with. Say enjoy them.

× Yeah, it's funny, but I, I was really excited because, uh, around, uh, some of.

✓ Yeah, it's funny, but I was really excited because I rode it around the neighborhood.

The original thought stops after because and does not provide a complete reason. Complete the clause after because with a subject and verb. The suggested ending is an example; replace it with the reason you intended.

× and personally I can say that my.

✓ And personally, I can say that my bike was very important to me.

The clause ends with my, a possessive determiner that must be followed by a noun. Complete the thought with the noun and the rest of the idea. The suggested ending is an example.